Hi Aliana, I like the way you have used speech throughout your story. I also like the times you choose word thoughtfully to add to the excitement. I would love to know what the did with the dresses and other items in the suitcase? I don't know if you know this but my middle name is Amy. Keep up the thoughtful writing From Mrs Carruthers.
Exciting story, Aliana! I liked how created the scene of suitcase discovery, using Harvey. Will there be a second part to the story? I wonder what would happen if the blue dresses are magical. Take care!
Hi Aliana, I like the way you have used speech throughout your story. I also like the times you choose word thoughtfully to add to the excitement. I would love to know what the did with the dresses and other items in the suitcase? I don't know if you know this but my middle name is Amy.
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Exciting story, Aliana! I liked how created the scene of suitcase discovery, using Harvey. Will there be a second part to the story? I wonder what would happen if the blue dresses are magical. Take care!
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