Thursday 19 August 2021

Butterfly Landing

2 comments:

  1. What a nice story, Aliana. I liked your title and how it suits to your story. Just one word: punctuation (check as we do in class). Take care!

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    1. Thanks Mrs Adina your a really nice teacher and i will work on my punctuation bye!

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